Okay
you did fine but for your own sake we all need to get better!
heres what I found!
Bass needs to be stonger, use the soundgoodizer to make it stronger
the synth at 1:08 was the same as the first one so change it to something else or get rid of it.
also the buildup at the start was too fast for me!
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I won't take away stars for those because it was good and nobodys perfect!