I love this
the begging sucks as you said but the rest outshines the beggining!
I ask everyone to listen to the whole song before voting or reviewing!
5/5
I love this
the begging sucks as you said but the rest outshines the beggining!
I ask everyone to listen to the whole song before voting or reviewing!
5/5
Thanks! I couldn't think of what to put in the beginning... Normally I try to parallel another part of the song but the rest of the song was just so self-contained that I couldn't find anything to parallel.
alright
ready for my take?
1. the main bass is not low enough. when you do that make it louder and reverb it, it sounds awsome!
2. the synth that starts at 1:26 Is annoying.. It can be ANYTHING else but just not that. don't take any offence!
3. the kick of your drum could be a tad stronger... use the soundgoodizer!
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Of course all of the things I said above will not take away from your score! please give yourself a pat on the back for what you did for me!
5/5 10/10
Yeah I actually tried some with the soundgoodizer, The flow got better but the charm pretty much left the song, I will take another shot at it. I've already made the bass louder, I thought people was going to say the opposite - maybe my speakers are tricking me again. Thanks for the comment anyhow :)
wow...
well I am russian so I can't understand anything... but It is good!
this is one of the only good rap on newgrounds!
I think you know
I think you know you suck!
i dont care wat u gotta say
well
this is okay... things you need to improve on:
at 0:10 the trancecorder took a big bad leap
the drums don't have anykind of rhythm to them, they are just random instruments played at the first 1/4 of the measure
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All in all it sounds suspisiously like kleerups cords
Thanks for your review!
I can't hear a lep at 0:10...
As I wrote in the comment, it is only a test of this sytrus sound! I know that the rhythm is not good but I produced the song only because of the sound, without any rhythm it would sound even worse! And why make a good, difficult rhythm for a test?
(the hihat is not a every 1/4 but on every 2nd 1/8! ;-))
I'm sorry
I don't like improv, it doesn't make anything better... JUST COMPOSE IT!
seriously this stuff ain't for ng...
I don't know how to read, or write music. But, People like to see what people can do on the spur of the moment. I'd like to know who you are, claiming that just becasue you don't like something, it doesn't belond somewhere. Go fuck yourself. Kthx <3
wow
this is going on the featured audio period!!
hahaha thanks! glad you like it! it's gonna be super awesome!
...wow.....
If it's a fail then why doo you post it...
Because I felt like it?
Anything is useful. If you can't see that then I can't see how you got to where you are.
Tell me, why does anyone do anything? Because they feel like it. I felt like it and I did it. If you don't like it, then you can give a well-structured review which does not consist of merely a poorly-written question.
Now if you do not mind I am going to go post some more crap, just for you. :D
ok well
obviously you don't understand what 8-bit means.....
this sucks, the whole thing.... theres nothing for you to get better at here. the whole song is terribly composed... as if a joke to music artists like me.
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Please compose another song and I can tell you whats wrong with that!
That would be why I have "Malfunction" at the end of it.
It is a loop, not a song, and it is in Miscellaneous for a reason.
It /is/ a joke.
If I didn't understand what 8-Bit was, this would not be a "malfunction."
Edit: And who the fuck are you to judge who is and who isn't an artist?
You get the same ratings as me, so don't even try.
Allright!
very good I like everything except the fact that the piano needs to be way louder! try that and see how it sounds!
Thanks for your comment :).
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